The lion wasz lazy. He is brave and strong. And he had a big heart. The lion is slumbering. And he had eyes as red as a fire/The muse was shy. And the mouse is same? He meek?.The mouse is nice.And the mouse eye are big like a car .THe mouse’s house is under a rock.And the mouse is gret like a mentor.And the mouse visited the lion and the lion grrrrrrr!at the mouse and the mouse said I'm a nice mouse.
Hi Ashard, Zejm here.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you added describing word's to your story about the lion and the mouse. I also think that you should get a teacher or someone sitting next to you to spell check it for you. Have you ever met a lion or a mouse? Blog ya Later :}
Hi Ashard Michael here. I really love you story, you need put some stuff in the right spot. Did Mouse and the Lion become friends? Blog you later byee.MICHAEL!.
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