Ni Hao Arshad, thank you for sharing your work with us. I enjoyed reading your story. Your next steps are: 1. To read your story to make sure it makes sense 2. To write the story in your own words and 3. Check for spelling mistakes. Do you think it would make a difference to your story if you had pictures linking to it? Have a good day.
Ni Hao Arshad, thank you for sharing your work with us. I enjoyed reading your story. Your next steps are: 1. To read your story to make sure it makes sense 2. To write the story in your own words and 3. Check for spelling mistakes. Do you think it would make a difference to your story if you had pictures linking to it? Have a good day.
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